Purely gravitational!

When it came to orbiting your love,

I was more an electron circling you,

in need, while you were,

the elusive celestial atom.

But just when I thought.

I was getting close

to your perihelion,

as you were moving fast,

you changed your axis.

and now I find in your

new aphelion state of mind,

I am the farthest from

your focus.

At a point of no return.

Reviews

[Tony Jordan]

One moment we are all they want - next we are everything they hate. Brilliant metaphor A.M.
Excellent write mate.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Tony for your kind words my friend.