I saw Mother and Mother saw me!

Did Earth see me

before I'd seen her?

I saw the world,

and she saw me.

We were both passing.

Hello Mother!

Hello Son!

Reviews

[Tony Jordan]

The little blue speck might well have been expecting you when the star you resided in formerly ceased to exist - s**t that sounds like Superman when I read it back lol
xD

Nice write mate !

[andrew mitchell]

thank you tony yes indeed sounds like superman.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

love the metaphor here....the literal and figurative...

you have such a gift for these short philosophical pieces...

j.

[andrew mitchell]

thank you j for your complimentary words.