Hooked on your line I was cast.

You were no more,

but a lake blue;

to drown in your love,

but you had me

cast adrift not connected.

Did severed thoughts

sent adrift 

come together

on tides of peace

knowing the separation?

Hooked on your line

I was cast,

as our tides changed

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

your poem inspires me to go celestial on ya! two very foreign worlds "never the twain to meet" :(
I think your title is especially good .. just the right bit of mind tweek to challenge but not baffle me ..(not hard to do) ;}
it's tough to be held "on the line" ..we get played .. masterfully at times ...trivial hearts ..just there for amusement .. glad your protagonist grasped that two tides had changed and not just one .. leaves me with a bit of fairness .. :)
E.
ps great title!!!

[andrew mitchell]

Thanks E for reading!

[Tony Jordan]

Either we grow together or grow apart but we will grow regardless. Communication is the key. But sometimes it is what it is.
Deeply poignant A. M.

[andrew mitchell]

Thanks Tony for reading!