Phases from birth.

Phases from birth.

A Poem by andrew mitchell

The trilogy
of man's phases
from birth,
boy fathers man.

© 2017 andrew mitchell


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Yes, indeed! Exactly true.

Or in the Australian preferred phase....boy fathers (sports)man!

Very clever writing!

Posted 8 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

8 Years Ago

thank you so much doodley for your kind words
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Very neat
this cycle

Beautiful

Posted 8 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

8 Years Ago

Thank you SoloSolace.
yes yes yes....

man fathers boy and then the exact reverse happens as well.

Posted 8 Years Ago


There is an album by Hotlips, (the precursor of 10cc) that is called 'You don't like it because you didn't think of it first' That sums up exactly my feelings on this. Clever sod!

Posted 8 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

8 Years Ago

Thank you Ken lol, yes its an interesting look how the boy growing up forges the man he will become.
yep...that's about it....such a dry sense of humor in this one ..i just have to laugh ..you are great at it sir! would, we would keep it so simple :{
E.

Posted 8 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

8 Years Ago

funny einstein when you laugh i laugh lol thanks for reading the simplicity of it all.
Einstein Noodle

8 Years Ago

simpatico bro!
I guess life is a trilogy. I need to get busy so I can make some spinoffs of my own....life's not much fun when your the only one writing the stories. I would like to read the start of a hobbits journey while I finish up as the last of the king.

Always a pleasure Andrew. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 8 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

8 Years Ago

Thank you for commenting Shy Joe
This felt a bit like one of those 'magic eye' pictures of the 90's where the viewer had to stare until the 3D image formed.
There is an 'aha' moment just like that in this very cleverly worded and sagely piece A.M.

Posted 8 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

8 Years Ago

thank you so much Tony for reading

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