What is love?

What is love,

but chemicals integrating

on the spit forming

ties consumed in a kiss,

shared, turning around,

riding the highs naturale,

until the connection of

mind with body says

" Stop!" 

"That's all!"

"It's cooked!"

Reviews

[Dr. YumnaKay]

"What is love,
but chemicals integrating
on the spit forming
ties consumed in a kiss,"

Interesting perception of love. It's cooked alright. Somehow this made me laugh. I liked reading this :)

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you YumnaKay, I have read your works too although I have not commented, but enjoyed the banter between two fine writers you and Tony lol

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Hahah I'm glad I'm a source of enjoyment for some people here, Andrew ;) I read nearly all your works too but it often flies over my head ;p

[andrew mitchell]

Its funny when I read the science of love and the body releasing its hormones that we deduce as being in love , it took the shine away from falling in love somewhat. It doesn't pay to be too scientific lol:):)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

It doesn't pay to being a lovebird either ;) better safe than sorry :P

[andrew mitchell]

hahahaha and yes i know my poetry is over the top, just like to be bizarre sometimes away from the norm for my muse but still sharing, as monty python fan their works were funny but obscenely bizarre lol. thank you for reading and i will now comment on your fine works:)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Not over the top, just too good for this tiny head here to understand ;)
You're welcome! A pleasure :)

[MsJewel]

It's always a delight to read your poetry Andrew. I love the last line. Perfect! :) Julie

[andrew mitchell]

Wow! thank you julie that's a nice compliment!:)

[Drcicarlo]

Lovely and delectable. The simplicity is elegant and well organized. "ties consumed in a kiss..." I enjoyed this a lot. It's all delicious until it's stuck on your pan. Hmm.

[andrew mitchell]

thank you for your lovely review erica

[Tony Jordan]

And it sizzles until one day it just evaporates - just like that!! Then only the dark stain of "the way we were" remains on the spit.
This speaks loudly to me AM.

[andrew mitchell]

thank you as always tony