A gem indeed, I saw your cracks.

There was no more
turquoise in boys,
as there was
pearls in girls,
each displayed
tarnished stones
on broken toys.

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

nice job sir! i like this one a lot ..tons said effortlessly with whole novels written between the lines .. children often don't play well together do they?! and i love the title ...once the jig is up we can all relax a little and be humbled ;}
E.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Sir E for taking the time to visit.

[apennylate]

Hah, this one caught my eye, the syllable sounds and word choice make a colorful ride... Well penned...

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you so much for your comments

[apennylate]

You are most welcome...