Star gazing

A Poem by andrew mitchell

From your comments

that came within,

I saw a comet passing.

Momentarily,

I was no more here,

than I was up there.

What did you say?

© 2017 andrew mitchell

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gayleadele

This is quite peaceful. Love it.

Posted 8 Years Ago

Shweta

Short and lovely...Nice short and sweet poems posted

Posted 8 Years Ago

8 Years Ago

thank you for reading shwetz

Great Aunt Astri

Oh Andrew, this made me laugh! I love the play on 'comment' and 'comet'. And I completely understand what you mean when you say you were no more here than you were up there. Wonderful poem!

Posted 8 Years Ago

8 Years Ago

i'm just glad i got a review lol but i know ,you know, where we are coming from lol.

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Added on March 27, 2017
Last Updated on March 27, 2017

Author

andrew mitchell

adelaide, Australia

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Strindberg said. " When I come home and sit at my writing table, then I live.... I live, and I live in manifold fashion of all human beings. I depict; I am glad with the glad, wicked with the wicked,.. more..