When the writings on the wall!

I wasn't suppose

to know my future,

but looking ahead, 

planning now,

I was shaping tomorrow's today

that was coming.

Reviews

[ms. barrie]

i feel this piece brilliantly captures a sense of foreboding about the consequences of one wasting their true talents in regards to (trying) to chase their dreams...lest it's too late to & one sitting in shadowy rooms being full of regret/bitterness.

i always adore your compelling, satirical, yet hopeful clever use of word weaving that entice one's imagination to chew on

thank you for sharing- x

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you ms Barrie for reading and stopping by, its super that inspired this write and how what you save now can alter your lifestyle later, its a daunting prospect! scary!

[ms. barrie]

again, your pen captured that topic, etc brilliantly!! and you're most welcome, Andrew - x

[jacob erin-cilberto]

sometimes i think we reach a point where we over plan...i want to go back to my youth...when i just jumped in head first, with reckless abandon.

j.

[andrew mitchell]

Super inspired this write knowing if you don't have much its not looking good lol.

[Coyote Poetry]

I understand this poem. Future comes quickly and I can see the new days a coming. Leave me with concern. Thank you Andrew for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you John for reviewing my work.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Andrew.