The snake of verse.

Was not your mouth,
the gateway to hell,
your tongue,
the executioner's blade
in your cutting room
echoing the throes
of filth and verse.

Reviews

[Kelly Scheppers]

...sounds Elizabethan to me. Pretty cool, Andrew!

[andrew mitchell]

haha Kelly, just having fun with those over dramatic theatrical lines. so nice to hear from you and happy easter kelly.

[Kelly Scheppers]

...awww, thank you, Andrew! How do you celebrate Easter in Australia, the same as we do in the USA?

[andrew mitchell]

like any western world kelly, although ours is low key

[jacob erin-cilberto]

damn that muse anyway...

shouts me awake and cusses at me if i try to ignore.

[andrew mitchell]

lol its a bit like that! thanks jacob.

[emmajoy]

Whilst your words hide pretty deep feelings, you're more than able to place them in an effective and adult manner.. far better than a rant.

[andrew mitchell]

thank you emmajoy, was trying to do a theatrical piece like shakespeare, to project out loud the verses lol. was for my muse at 200am

[emmajoy]

Some muse you have - smiling 'good nigh't!

[andrew mitchell]

good night too lol