A spinner's top!

A Poem by andrew mitchell

When she shaved

her legs smooth,

his thoughts

started to unwind,

but when she

decided to show more

his thoughts became

entangled.

© 2017 andrew mitchell

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jacob erin-cilberto

oh those imperial tops...and those imperial women!!!!!!

j.

Posted 8 Years Ago

8 Years Ago

Thank you jacob lol

Einstein Noodle

ohhhhh my! spinning i yam! ... this is so hot and sensual .. ohhhhhhhhh what entanglement may be! love love love this sir! thanks for sharing!
E.

Posted 8 Years Ago

8 Years Ago

Thank you E, for your kind words:)

Sami Khalil

The effects can be tangling, tingling and might be tongue(ling)...lol
Just kidding.
You have summed it up marvelously king Homour...:)....

Posted 8 Years Ago

8 Years Ago

lol Thank you Sir Sami, Oh gracious one!:)

8 Years Ago

Hahaha...You are welcome...:)...............

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Added on April 20, 2017
Last Updated on April 20, 2017

Author

andrew mitchell

adelaide, Australia

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Strindberg said. " When I come home and sit at my writing table, then I live.... I live, and I live in manifold fashion of all human beings. I depict; I am glad with the glad, wicked with the wicked,.. more..