Hey! I'm over here!

Was one step beyond,

an overstep,

looking back,

for I'm here,

but....

I was over there;

just too many steps?

Reviews

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Another unique piece, Andrew.

This made me think about our journey through life; how we get from there to here, and suddenly look back and scratch our heads and wonder just how that happened? Where did the years go?

Inventive and thought provoking writing, as always. Nicely done.

[andrew mitchell]

Exactly my friend, yes indeed and how short that bridge is!

[andrew mitchell]

Humbled by your kind words Doodley.