No lead in your pencil.

Your pencilled thoughts
grafitti's my page
in scribbled entanglements,
but easily erased,
you lacked lead....
in your pencil.

Reviews

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

Short in length--deeper in thought.

[Pete]

no harm no foul. that's why i insist that folks use disappearing ink when writing upon my page. i think this is why copy machines and lawyers were invented. nice job Andrew.

[andrew mitchell]

lol thanks pete