The Cold.

As the aspirin above dissolves

into marshmallow skies,

the effervescence rains

on thoughts clouded, cold.

Where the wet ideas

congregate in puddles blown....

on tissues discarded.

The Cold.

Reviews

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

So clever Andrew! Great idea, wordage & congested imagery:). The ending blows me away (pun intended!)...Great read and hope you feel better soon!

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Annette for a lovely review and thank you, can't wait to get better.