Entangled on your barbwire smile.

The protuberance of your lies

was no more longer than you nose,

no more wider than your barbwire smile,

unlike the venom you spit

from your long forked tongue,

I saw you slither away

to your own dark shadows.

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

love the ending sir ...that's how it should always go says i! too many time they slither too long ... >;/
love the personifications ... i used barbed wire to hold log tripods together to carry the logs and make my rustic fence ... it says "keep out" ;) just like those barbwire smiles say ... keep out! :)
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[andrew mitchell]

Belated thank yous my friend.