The Lapidary of love grinded.

The Lapidary of love grinded.

A Poem by andrew mitchell

The angle of my love
faceted on your face
you responded,
shining on, shining on,
on my turning
your body gleaming,
a gemstone in the making.

© 2017 andrew mitchell


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one way to cut a diamond!

Posted 8 Years Ago
Precious metaphor! Sensual and passionate. The love of a living gem, brought to life. "You responded shining on, shining on, on my turning"- meltingly, tenderly rapturous. Be still my beating heart! Eloquent, Excellent!

Posted 8 Years Ago

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 Added on June 9, 2017
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andrew mitchell
andrew mitchell

adelaide, Australia



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