A kaleidoscope of you.

On the kaleidoscope of colours

filtering through my mind,

on the carousel of thoughts

going round and round entwined,

on a dream of endless beginnings

blowing across the opened skies,

I travel on your memories

on a tear that cannot cry.

On a kaleidoscope of colours

filtering through my mind

I live on the promise,

our love will never die.

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

wow! Mr. romantic!! :) well said .. graphic metaphor ..i can see the patterns and colors as well as hear those "crystals rolling around ..we all had one at one time or another as kids ..i think they were cheap enough even an 8 yr old could afford one ... i use to mow lawns, rake leaves and shovel snow at that age ..so i did have me own money ;)
the contrast of this poem with your typical style and humor makes it the more precious and lovely to read and reflect on ..thanks for sharing my friend
E.

[andrew mitchell]

Wow epic review Einstein, thank you so much. this was a style I did when I started writing before free verse and satire took over. lol

[Einstein Noodle]

long live the long time agos!!!! ;)

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Certainly very different from your usual writes and a pleasant surprise as such.

A very romantic piece with lovely images and description of colour, a rainbow of love in the mind.

As always, nicely written. Well done.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Doodley very much for your kind words.

[Ken Simm.]

I'm reminded here of the Theme song to the Thomas Crown Affair and its a song I really like. This is also.

[andrew mitchell]

That was my inspiration. I studied the flow and rhythm of that song and used the style to produce my own, I hope it's not plagarism but I will use that style of highs and lows again. Thanks Ken for reading and picking up on the theme tune I wished to emulate.

[andrew mitchell]

That was my inspiration. I studied the flow and rhythm of that song and used the style to produce my own, I hope it's not plagarism but I will use that style of highs and lows again. Thanks Ken for reading and picking up on the theme tune I wished to emulate.

[CAPOLAVORO]

Perfectly beautiful Andrew. It could make everyone's heart melt. It could be a great story of love packed on a poem. Great write! :)

[andrew mitchell]

thank you so much

[Sami Khalil]

Sir Romantic at his best. Very swooning and wooing and could be wowing...:)......................

[andrew mitchell]

i am humbled by your review Elvis of Verse!

[Sami Khalil]

Hahaha. You are welcome. ...:::)))

[Pete]

a lovely one Andrew. such sweet, touching feelings. wonderful imagery/metaphors. great promise ...

[andrew mitchell]

thank you pete ..........

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Oh, I think this is the first romantic write of yours that I've read so far. A nice change :) I love your word choices here, especially "dream of endless beginnings"

[andrew mitchell]

thank you yk for dropping in

[Dr. YumnaKay]

You're welcome, Andrew :)

[Patricia Wedel]

"On the carousel of thoughts...
going round and round entwined" is
a beautiful expression of romance.
To catch the golden ring of memories.
truly, Pat

[andrew mitchell]

thank you pat, one review by you is a hundred reviews being a fav poem of mine that i have written, just to get an ounce of recognition is great. thanks again.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Andrew... this is an extraordinary poem... reminds me of the lyrics that would be a hit song. you are welcome.