About your heartburn!

The exhuming of your thoughts

left an xray of your heart

devoid of love pending,

a warrant for your cardiac arrest

was issued-

a fugitive minus love

on the run,

a heartburn in the making.

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

clever and at your best sir! together with your title that first line is so graphic .. as anyone with heartburn will tell ... ugh!
the loveless can run and run but the shrreef will get them in the end eh!?
E.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you E :):)

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

Witty words always win the day! Poetic autopsy- amazingly original. You leave me smiling...and pondering, "The exhuming of your thoughts..." Excellent!

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you kindly Anette:):)