When time carves the geometry on love.

The diameter of your smile

was no more than

the circumference of your love

contained within our circle,

but will we escape the circular saw of life?

For time, the carpenter

carves out the rest of our lives,

the shavings of our journeys

lay scattered on remembrance.

Reviews

[Tony Jordan]

Sometimes we throw shapes with people who come into our lives - when they leave us, they leave their mark.
I like the change in tone in the second stanza A.M.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Tony for your kind words and nice to see you on the site once more!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i was terrible at Geometry...and thus it translated into me screwing up the circle...when it came to the radius of love...

[andrew mitchell]

I didn't like physics either just didn't have the interest . Thanks J.

[Relic]

There will always be residue of some kind in a relationship. Whether that's good residue or bad, we hold the key.

[andrew mitchell]

Yes Tim we do walk the path we make. Thanks for dropping by.