The house of mirrors

Mirror Mirror on the wall

whose soul will you swallow

from this world?

Be it the girl

with kaleidoscope eyes,

or the comic who

laughs and cries.

Mirror mirror on the wall

whose soul will you destroy

from this world?

In the house of mirrors

minds quiver

lost dimensions

on shattered shards;

no one comes out....

but light reflecting

from across the street

the House of Cards.

Reviews

[emmajoy]

You reach out and touch every part of emotion, somehow. Perhaps it's the questions.. perhaps its the fact the reader has to wait for the end, then - and only then, have time to search an answer. Perhaps.

We see selves as we want to sometimes but sometimes see nothing or.. too much.. here's to a broken mirror to set the story straight!

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you emma for your kind review and dropping by.:)

[ms. barrie]

stunning imagery, that awakens one's imagination...
i adore this chaotic, dark whimsical tale you wrought
succinctly.

somewhat reminiscent of Grimms' faerie tales & im always amazed at your talent for both rhyme & meter.
your pen never fails. thank you muchly for the ride
and sharing -- xx--

[andrew mitchell]

thank you so much ms.barrie for your lovely review and kind words.:):)

[ms. barrie]

you're most welcome, Andrew..btw...this (so far)
one of my favorites from you. will be back again soon. happy writings :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Lucy just moved from the Sky to the mirror..."picture yourself on a boat in a mirror"

i like the rhyme scheme in this..

[andrew mitchell]

thank you j for your words.