All for one and all for now.

Who wears the hollow crown,
but an empty mind,
no intelligence needed,
just obese in thought
with insulting tongue.

Reviews

[ms. barrie]

o I adore this! this is succinctly wrought with elegance of subtle contempt, that leaves one with a deep paper cut upon those who seem to be a legend in their own mind. bravo!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

oooh, we have been having similar people "obese in thought" making harsh comments at our college...very hurtful.

[Tony Jordan]

And selective foot bone spurs which prohibit active service but are fine for basketball. Heil derTrump!

[AcasualPawn]

Arrogant, prideful
Idiot, dumb, fat intelligence, narrow thoughts
Decayed tounge.....



Who is he??????


Nice poem

[Einstein Noodle]

this reads like a wise aphorism from Confucius ..hollow crown/empty mind .. its a bit of irony as well because if i am not mistaken ..Eastern Philosophies and meditative states seek an "empty mind" ;))
E.