The wishing well!

On cobbled mind's path

I travelled

I tripped

I fell over your circumference

of your heart.

I jumped over

your stepping stones

of memories you laid

now lying deep

in my wishing well.

Reviews

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Cobbled mind's path.....love that line!

We certainly do walk such paths when we start a new relationship with someone. Like you have written, their mind is full of stepping stones, memories of the past hurts and lovers, that one must evade in order to reach their inner depths. A place where we can lay down our own stone and nurture it's memory. And hopefully stay beside it for all time.

This is an excellent musing on the nature of wading through the depths of the past to build a foundation for a loving relationship. A wonderful idea very well executed. Fine work.

[andrew mitchell]

As always thank you very much for your kind words Doodley.

[Diane]

Oh I liked that. It is different then what I have been reading lately. I can review this in my head perfectly. I am having an issue writing it down.

I am loving the fact that you are making your way through a path someone else made, but they made in your space. If what I said above made no since I am sorry.(Sounds better in my head) I really enjoyed it though.

[andrew mitchell]

You nailed it Diane thanks for reading, lovely review and hope you are feeling better:)

[Diane]

I nailed it? Awesome! Still sounded better in my head.
Oh yes, I feel so much better. Thank you for asking.