Love crackling!

Love crackling!

A Poem by andrew mitchell

The crackling of blistering hearts
the sun shined brightly
not deserving a second chance,
broken....

they shrivelled away
as the cloud shed a tear.
the moon disappeared 
the sea of love withdrew.

© 2017 andrew mitchell


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I like the use of the adjective blistering in the first line. Threw me off my game and made me pay attention to the rest of them poem.

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 Added on November 27, 2017
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andrew mitchell
andrew mitchell

adelaide, Australia



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