A hit in the midriff changes everything!

A hit in the midriff changes everything!

A Poem by andrew mitchell

When the exclamation mark
took a hit
to the midriff
it became a question.

© 2017 andrew mitchell


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well...i guess it did ... how can stating the obvious be so engrossing and mysterious ... the first time i took a hit like that the exlaimation point came after along with a lot of other scuffling adjectives and punctuations ;))))thanks for keeping it light sir ..such a pleasure
E.

Posted 8 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much Einstein
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Gee
Morning young fella.....don't mention the C word.....very clever this Andrew, very.
Hope all is well with you and yours


Posted 8 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

8 Years Ago

And you too Gee, I'm looking forward to the third test!!!
Gee

8 Years Ago

Of course you are , another trophy to put with the won again rugby league world cup.
I think .. read more
andrew mitchell

8 Years Ago

lol.............
Very funny and creative. I guess we all need that jolt to stomach things. LOl

Posted 8 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

8 Years Ago

Thank you kindly Sami
Sami Khalil

8 Years Ago

You are welcome .

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Added on December 5, 2017
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andrew mitchell
andrew mitchell

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