What of it?

scribbles of no directions!

Give a man a puddle
and he’ll walk on water.
Give a man a boat
and he’ll sail on it.
Give a man an ocean
and he’s out of his depth.
Give a man a well
and he’ll make a wish out of it.
Give a man a drink
and he’ll probably waste it.
But give a man sorrow
and he’ll drown in it.

Reviews

[sette]

i like the rhyming words and the words used. It talks about a man's pain when it comes to loving someone. I like the last line give me sorrow, I'll be drowning... describes the kind of love a man has for his woman, the pain of loving the woman. nice writing.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you for your words sette.