A nine carat mind!

From a rough cut born

came a polished mind

over the years travelled,

faceted in opinions

but open to view

even on reflection....

there was a beauty within

if not, the clarity was there.

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

we can say what we will...but honest clarity trumps ugly every time ;) your poem made me think of me bald babies brain and how all that repetition and new path making has made it into a very deeply wrinkled sponge ... wrung out too many times perhaps...loosing some elasticity ;( i give you nine carats on this one sir ..
E.

[andrew mitchell]

Haha you are always generous Einstein with your words. Thank you my friend.