If you hear Amen after a gunshot!

If you hear Amen after a gunshot!

A Poem by andrew mitchell

Watch out
if you hear 
the NRA say Amen -
it means so be it!

Courses are available now
"How to dodge a bullet!"

For beginners please bring
a bullet proof vest
casualties can be high!
Yes! We visit schools!

© 2018 andrew mitchell


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Another sad day for the USA. Many questions and no answers. Las Vegas, Texas and now Florida. USA is ran by big business, poor leadership and no concern for the poor and the children. The sad part Andrew is. Most USA citizen won't care or remember in a week. Powerful and true words shared my friend.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


The last sentence feels forced in comparison, but the rest is really good.

I get what you're trying to say with it, but I feel like it needs better flair for the end.

Just my opinion. Write on.

Posted 7 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

7 Years Ago

Thanks anyway maybe you are right but for me its right in the context I'm pissed off with the bigotr.. read more

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Added on February 19, 2018
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andrew mitchell
andrew mitchell

adelaide, Australia



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