A dream's room to let!
A Poem by
andrew mitchell
There was always
room to dream
the standard room,
the double room,
the queen size room,
the studio apartment.
It all depended on
how big the dream,
and how much time
you had to live it.
The only problem
with such a dream
was waking up,
and trying to find it.
While the sign read.
Do not disturb!
© 2018 andrew mitchell
Reviews
hmm this was very thought provoking and definitely something to ponder. I suppose our dreams are only as big as the rooms in which we accommodate them, huh? ;p nice job!
Posted 7 Years Ago
7 Years Ago
Thank you very much.
Actually It all depends on how much time we have for dreaming. Sometimes I even dream in the shower. What a delightfully dreamy poem, Andrew.
Posted 7 Years Ago
Actually It all depends on how much time we have for dreaming. Sometimes I even dream in the shower. What a delightfully dreamy poem, Andrew.
Nice. The touch of irony at the end is clever, and really ties the room together (sorry. I couldn't help it)
I really like this.
Posted 7 Years Ago
Nice. The touch of irony at the end is clever, and really ties the room together (sorry. I couldn't help it)
I really like this.
7 Years Ago
Lol thanks charlie
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Added on July 14, 2018
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andrew mitchell adelaide, Australia
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