Life's masquerade ball.

Pray tell

is not the mask

to act on,

and not to hide behind

as previously thought.

For if you could

see my heart my dear,

you'd surely run away.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Honest thoughts led to honest ending. I did like this poem my friend. Thank you Andrew for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Einstein Noodle]

It blows me away how differently we see things ... i like the thought of acting on my mask as a more positive take on "hiding" the true self. Seems your speaker has a dark side and acts according to the mask to save the "other" in the relationship ... your making me use me noodle again andrew .. nice fresh take on a phony ... :)
E.

[andrew mitchell]

As always your thoughts impress.😃

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you dear sir

[Einstein Noodle]

:) ...............

[Ardra]

I somehow felt like the person loves so much .... That it maybe overwhelming for the other person....

[andrew mitchell]

Indeed yes thank you Ardra