The letter in the fire divided two worlds.

While the thoughts
were confined
to the size of the paper,
there was a slip of the pen.
Where once moments collided,
the memories now live
worlds apart.

Reviews

[Neville]

Perfectly penned in my book Sir and true..... Neville

[andrew mitchell]

THanks Neville, appreciate your comments.

[Neville]

My sincere pleasure Andrew & all good things to you.. N

[θεά]

There is a kind harking back to a time that was once shared by two minds who thought alike. But that is now in the past. And well deservedly so. Good, pithy writing dear Andrew!

Best,
M.

[andrew mitchell]

Malika you are back! Thanks for reading.

[θεά ]

Hi Andrew,

Yes I am! And for good! How have you been? Be prepared for lots of RRs and reviews. ;)

Cheers!
M.

[angel]

"The Thoughts were confined to the size of the paper." I love that phrase. I guess that is what makes good writing so rare.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you angel

[jacob erin-cilberto]

sometimes the poetry we write about the past is a far cry from how it really was...moments collide with memories and we all reflect them differently...perhaps how we wish it had been.

[andrew mitchell]

Indeed yes Jacob, thanks for dropping by.