It was a party of sorts like match and burn!

It was a party of sorts like match and burn!

A Poem by andrew mitchell

When Ms. Straight bumped into 
Ms. Construe, things got really twisted,
and how Ms. Amplified knew
how to talk loudly
for there was no such person
as Ms. Quiet.

But as per usual things got heated
when Ms. B***h arrived,
however Ms. Rain had her way
of dampening the mood too.

While Ms. Sexy
had us all in awe

" Look at those pins!"

Ms. Brains hinted,
she was a little light headed.
Ms. Jealousy seemed everywhere!

As for me I was
admiring Ms. Naked.
I'm sure she was Ms. Suspenders,
maybe they were sisters.

It became apparent,
I was distracted by Ms. Buttocks.
Why does everything have to be so hard?
Then I saw her Ms. Personality,
somewhat overbearing I thought
but she came to the rescue!

Looking back I did think
there was a lack of supervision.
Where was Ms. Adults only!
All the while 
I was hoping Ms. Right
would arrive.
She never did,
but I met Ms. Fun.


Meanwhile........



At the blood bank, the heart, 
cerebral ramblings travel
on haemoglobin trying to make sense of

" falling in love."

Funny, I don't remember
falling, but I was dizzy.


The End.

© 2018 andrew mitchell


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I love your imaginative selections for names and the way your poem conveys how much of a scramble it can feel to be in a noisy rowdy party situation. I love the way your name convention suggests how we see someone in such a situation, jump to some conclusion about him/her, and suddenly we are surrounded by our assumptions. This is a very clever way to make a mysterious point! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 7 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

7 Years Ago

Thank you very much Margie 😀

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