So many lines!

So many lines!

A Poem by andrew mitchell

Enjoying a sip of wine
I was inclined
to think my decline
was defined by the headline
that gave the sign
that the feline
sitting on dateline
was not a lifeline.

But the moonshine
taken on the shoreline
showing the skyline
reflected my waistline.

Tomorrow the sunshine
over the tree line
kept my thoughts
on the assembly line
close to the boundary line
of impending insanity.

Where my thoughts
could be categorised
as my interior design
they were confined,
I promise.

Anyway, the story is mine
I leave behind 
as my thoughts untied unwind.

Somewhat sublime
ahead of time
my words entwined 
in rhyme.
I look to the sky
wondering why.

© 2018 andrew mitchell


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So many lines of rhyme from you Andrew, unusual to see. I reckon it was the vino that dunnit. Your random and vino cocktail works well for me. Great fun.

Chris

Posted 7 Years Ago


Tis a fine line between her hem line and a tight line squire.. I would have another sip o vino, tis Friday eve after all.... dont they say a rhyme in thyme saves nine, or sonnet.. :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

7 Years Ago

hahahaha another silly write on lines! Whose line is it anyway!
Neville

7 Years Ago

shore line innit.. tis me reviewing you silly :)
Idle moments, random thoughts, the poet turns to rhyme. Appreciated the flow and the rhyming :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

7 Years Ago

Thank you Divya for your words, just that random thoughts
DIVYA

7 Years Ago

You’re welcome :)

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