It was all noise!

When the gift of the gab
was swallowed by
it’s own noise,
the silence was golden.

There was somewhat peace
found in the annoyance
when the audible
became inaudible.

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

I am smiling at these short lines. They are amusing in a quiet way :)

Chris

[andrew mitchell]

lol Thanks Chris for the smile too!

[Neville]

I really like this.. reminds me of the many times I can hardly hear myself think ... its the whispers in the background that are deafening...

[andrew mitchell]

yes indeed Neville thanks.

[Neville]

ssh or you will wake them up...

[kianatahleigh]

I really liked that this poem was simple and said so much using only a few words and I loved the concept.

[andrew mitchell]

Many thanks Kianna