I went through the ages!

I went through the ages!

A Poem by andrew mitchell

Took awhile to
reach old age.
I had to go through
the Ice Age,
the Stone Age,
the dark ages,
the Bronze Age,
the Iron Age,
the Middle Ages,
the modern ages,
the new age,
the act your age,
the maturity age,
and then there it was
like a shrine before me
on the mantle piece
“ old age!”
Even came with a mirror,
that was scary.

Blessed am I.

© 2019 andrew mitchell


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such a observant poem about what we all face. getting older. anything that can give comfort to the only and lonely is a poem well shared. very much appreciated. good work.

Posted 7 Years Ago


hahah this one's clever! I think I'm stuck between the 'act your age' and the 'maturity age' lool and I'm not sure if I even want to go through the old age :x
Guess we do need a mirror to remind us of where we stand...! Cool piece of writing, Andrew! :D

Posted 7 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

7 Years Ago

Thank you Doc, i have a immaturity age tag myself most of the time! lol.
You are truly ageless and timeless as the sands of time find your footprints 👣 along the shore to heavens door. Your eyes twinkle and the moon winks as this is your golden age where dreams are reality. Be still and listen to the winds of time... the age of Aquarius. truly, Pat

Posted 7 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

7 Years Ago

Lovely words Pat better than my poem. Thank you.
Patricia Wedel

7 Years Ago

dear Andrew... just thoughts that come to
Mind... aging is a privilege, but it is a pattern o.. read more
ahahahahah this is my new favorite sir ..every year i ask ..is it now??? then the next year ..is it now??? i need the mirror me thinks ... and some honest admissions :((( i even told everyone that asked ..last year ..that i was the next year older ... thinking i could get there sooner ... i didn't work my friend ..here i am still that younger year before :))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))
E.

Posted 7 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

7 Years Ago

lol that reminds me of the Marathon man starring Dustin Hoffman when he was in the dentist chair and.. read more
Einstein Noodle

7 Years Ago

ahahahahaha ... i love that movie .. Dustin is one of my favorite actors ... and i don't have favori.. read more

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andrew mitchell
andrew mitchell

adelaide, Australia



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