About that perfect moment.

Excuse me!

Can I have your attention!

Yes you!

You know that moment when

you're reading a poem,

and the whole world

doesn't exist anymore!

Well! This isn't it!

Sorry!

Welcome to my world

where I put fun

into dysfunctional.

For instance lets talk

about that perfect moment,

like that feeling you get

when you like someone.

That's just common sense 

leaving your body.

And you thought it was love.

Sorry!

Still, on the matters of the heart

love experts now say:

Don't break any one's heart,

they only have one.

They suggest break their bones,

humans have two hundred and six you know!

And finally,

while I still might

have your attention,

being honest may not get you a lot of friends

but it will always get you the right ones!

Got to go now.

I can't seem to find

my common sense!

Oh! One more thing I promise. 

Remember if you're further from the truth

you maybe closer to the lie. 

Reviews

[Pete]

not sure where i am after reading this. your world is twisted andrew. emerging with just a tickling of the funny bone which doesn't require a cast ... :)

[andrew mitchell]

lol Like a lot of my writes its suppose to be disjointed and dysfunctional because the world today is becoming just that " it doesn't make sense!" but hopefully fun to read. Thanks Pete.

[barleygirl]

I don't see this as "disjointed & dysfunctional" at all! I do feel that way sometimes when I'm reading you, but not this time. This was one of your most clear commentaries & I really relate to every sarcastic word! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Pete]

we're on the same page, couldn't agree more about the absurdity taking place in the world .... :)

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you both, much appreciated your comments.

[Coyote Poetry]

I do like the below saying.
"Oh! One more thing I promise.
Remember if you're further from the truth
you maybe closer to the lie."
Great wisdom shared. The more we talk, the less we say? Thank you Andrew for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you John yes the last is my fav in closing.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Andrew. A wise saying.

[Ardra]

Mmm :) ah good one for vdy.... Ah and about breaking bones I agree with that... :))
Your poems are always fun to read...

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Ardra I am glad someone likes my fun. Thank you again for reviewing.