When I see you.

When I see you

I see the wind blow your hair

even though you're not there

I see you.

When I see you

I see the sand through your toes

wash away in ocean blue

and I see you.

When I see you

you fade to dark

your light is sparse

you come in waves

but I see you.

When I see you

I close my eyes

I see you smile

against the stars

and I see you.

When I see you

I visualise behind brown eyes

in your mind I am you

and I see me...

Reviews

[Kelly Scheppers]

I really like this side of you, Andrew. Interesting twist at the end. Much enjoyed!

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you dear Kelly.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Andrew... seeing is believing when Stars shine the brightest in the memory of Love and windswept touches by the Sea. Amen

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you dear Pat.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

this has a romantic tinge to it...very much so...the idea of two becoming one...when the loves in our lives reflect us...and we see ourselves through their eyes.
great ending....really strong piece, andrew.
j.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Jacob for your words.

[Bluebird]

Love the rhythm in the lines. They echo the gust of the wind,the fading of light and the waves you refer to

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you bluebird