Swimming above sentence!

Into the pond
of words he dived
drowning in verse
he swam along
the flow of verbs
along the length
of adjectives described
he drifted....
into his own story
of pages turned.

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

well you knew this English teacher would dive into this one...i am still under the surface holding my breath.
nicely phrased.
j.

[andrew mitchell]

haha thank you for the smile J.

[R.E. Ray]

Andrew, I see myself in this poem, especially drowning! I think all can relate here, whether a writer or a reader.

[andrew mitchell]

Indeed RE. Ray thanks for commenting.