Somewhere in the tranquillity.

The ambience of I

was displaced

by the shadow 

you cast that took me

to the light

that I wanted 

to reflect 

in the mirror of you

I saw parts of me

displayed in the window

of my past trickling

down your memory lane.

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

if his past is in her memory...and her reflection of it in his...
the mirror of love holds them both secure.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you for your words Jacob.

[Leviari]

beautiful, expressive scenario. This poem is not only amazingly written but also soaked with emotion. I love the melancholic tone.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you so much Leviari