Three heart breaks.

1.
Took time to mend
the broken shards
of a cold heart
for the frost set in,
my ice queen.

2.
While there was
no current through
your heart beats
I felt electrocuted
when you blew your fuse.

3.
You cast your dark shadow
as you sail away
when torrential tears
not your own rain
off your impervious heart
only to see you in a state
of metamorphosis,
and later fly away.

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i guess this reaction from a woman is better than just an "i don't care"---
one of my exes had that volatile personality...she could blow a fuse in an instant...but damn i felt chemistry...
j.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Three morsels to chew over here Andrew. My favourite is number two with number one a close second. They have a way of saying pain and heartache in novel ways.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you John, just some scribbles which ran out of petrol so to speak so I put them altogether.. I don’t think I come close to your classics you have written in the past John which had so much gusto and more ponds to each punch.