When the house of thoughts abandon.

My best thoughts are
those that are fleeing ,
just fleeting moments.

I need another brain
to catch them.

When my thoughts
are vacating
I’m left by myself
feeling lonely.

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

I always find those moments come when I am most tired. They flash across the mind and then dissipate like mist in sun. What a thought to have a second brain to process them. Now that is original thinking Andrew.

Chris

[andrew mitchell]

I agree Chris, always caught off guard with those great thoughts that just come and go! Thanks for your words.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

wow what a concept...the second brain as back up....i like that idea...but then we might be overwhelmed thinking "two" much! :)))

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you J. There was a film a man with two brains if I remember correctly.