How deep is your puddle!

From the tears you shed

I walked around

your puddles of sorrow,

in fear that I ....

may drown 

in the depths

of your grief.

Reviews

[Kelly Scheppers]

I do believe it may be possible to drown in one's grief. I need coffee to contemplate this further...good seeing you again, Andrew!

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Kelly for gracing my page, delighted!

[Chris Shaw]

This is so unlike anything of yours I have read before. An acknowledgement and understanding of another person's sorrow. Truly sad

Chris

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Chris, sorry for the late reply.

[emmajoy]

There's an enigmatic touch to your words this morning. Perhaps a crowd of contemplation happened in your world today. These words have such a sadness, empathy that could also read evasiveness. Brief words that say more than seem.

[andrew mitchell]

Belated thank you em, sorry.

[emmajoy]

Truly hope you're feeling happier, Andrew.