When the tide changed.

There was no end
to a wave
in its continuum
as one bathed
in its glory spread,
but there was an end
from a wave goodbye
beached along
the sands of time.

Reviews

[ms. understood]

I really enjoyed this write. Very beautiful!

[andrew mitchell]

Thank our very much.

[Katrina Mckeown]

One of my favourite places as a child and when I manage to get there as an adult too! The beach is the place to be , it’s the place for me. Great imagery.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Katrina

[barleygirl]

Love this simple comparison done in imagery! *smile* Fondly, Margie

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Margie.:):)