The pool of wannabe mermaids.

In summer heat
the baptism of sensuality
was diving into the pool
of liquid gold
where Mother embraced
the swim of life
she took some
for her own
in the drowning
while keeping the chalice full.

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

sure would love to know what was in that chalice...
do mermaids drown in their own mythology?
maybe.
this is so interesting...i will be coming back to it, again.
as i am trying to put my thoughts together on this one.

[andrew mitchell]

Hi Jacob, it’s really about the fascination with water, be it the pool, holy water, pregnancy, and how sadly many toddlers drown with this fascinating medium, and of course Mother Nature keeping the chalice full for the sustenance of life.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

interesting...thanks, although i wanted to play with it some more and see what i would have come up with...
j.