I knew what you were thinking.

Between black and white

I saw your grey projected thoughts

search the room

within your mind

your eyes wide open

I was invited into

your house of doors.

Through your gaze

beams of light

illuminate the dancing dust

of subtle ever changing moments

reflected in the gathering

now time's memories

as you looked away.

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

within the mind lie thoughts....and usually they are grey....not black and white...and determining their exactness is a hazy illumination...we have to have faith in love, in each other.
nothing is ever perfect or perfectly clear.
j.

[andrew mitchell]

indeed J, thank you for your words.

[ms. barrie]

beautifully mesmerorizing ink...incredible word-play, hauntingly profound imagery.
i have a lot of catching up to do upon your art, as well as others. i look forward
to immerseing myself into soon as i can give them proper justice to.

anyhow, this is indeed a gem. i thank you for sharing your poetic gifts. - x

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you kindly ms.barrie.:)

[ms. barrie]

you’re most welcome, Andrew :)