Welcome ellipsis, glad you could make it!

While my mind was

entering an eclipse

where memories became

just shrouded mysteries

my life was followed

by three dots,

the notorious ellipses.

I broke many

a mirror on pausing

that was the strength

of three dots.

The world was going dotty,

and I was followed by three dots.

Life was suppose to be happy... or was it?

Plunging the knife

into the story ... did the story die?

Where did I put

my car keys... better still ...

where was the car?

Yes the three amigos

didn't cross any T's

or dot any or all the I's...

but they carried enough pauses

for the punch line...

Welcome ellipsis... glad you could make it...

I was expecting you.

Reviews

[kentuck14]

And he drove away in his Ellipsis! And where he was going . . . well that's for another poem . . .
T

[Ardra]

Elipses has been part of me like my shadow
And thats why i ran at the mention of it ... to check what was it that you thought about it :)

I always wonder if it was not for these three dots what would my writing look like :p
More clean less lost in thoughts... ;)

[andrew mitchell]

Thanks Ardra just poking fun at punctuation, stretching the boundaries of common sense and the imagination lol.

[Ardra]

:) always good to strech our boundaries
It was fun to read

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you my friend.