Two tunnels same outcome.

In the tunnel,

he who walks

in the shadows

will never see

the light of day,

and will be

hit by a train.

In the tunnel of love

not seeing the light,

he also

was hit

by a train.

Reviews

[alanwgraham]

I have often got difficulties Andrew picking up the metaphor in poetry and understanding what it's all about. If I try to write one I worry no one going to get it. In fact they often think it's about something else but that's okay. In this careers got literal and metaphor which is Original and witty. It's interesting that being in tunnels is one of the commonest dreams!
Cheers.
Alan

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Alan for your words yes one tunnel is the wrong path while the love tunnel is more fictitious being love blind with the impact of being hit by a train.