The ramblings of a fictional mind.

just that, the ramblings of a fictional mind.

To the thought

that carried

my mind away,

I want it back.

Beware the thought

that entertains

and where temptation takes you

for it may not be

the trip of a lifetime.

Reviews

[B. Boileau]

What a strange and wonderful trip ! What ever it is that you had before you wrote this, you need to share with the rest of us. Those ramblings... keep um coming

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Bill, good to hear from you again. You have been missed.

[barleygirl]

I love how you depict the rambling mind (which I'm quite familiar with), but I beg to differ. Your poem appears to suggest that there are good rambles & not-so-good ones. As I grow older, along with my increasing inability to harness my thoughts, I'm also blessed by a profound lack of judgment (not becuz I'm so great that I never judge, but I just don't see things in those terms anymore). Soooo . . . just enjoy the rambles & stop worrying whether it will be the trip of a lifetime. I probably won't remember the trip, so who cares how I define it? (((HUGS))) Fondly< Margie

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Margie

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i imagine this thought as the serpent in the garden.
Take a bite out of this idea and you will end up out of paradise.
And then find out the thought was misleading you all the while.
j.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you for your words J. You may be right!

[Einstein Noodle]

i am starting to like fiction more and more .... i like living on the edge :)))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))
E.

[andrew mitchell]

Best way to be Gene lol:)

[Einstein Noodle]

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