The day lust fell from dizzy heights.

Before the paragraphs of love

reached withering heights

the foreword mentioned

a warning of things to come

with cupid's archers

at the ready, loaded.

The revolution of love said " Charge!"

while the evolution of love

was more gentle permeating

the hearts of those willing to change

from caveman ways.

Every heart has its day

and every heart is broken

as marginal love, lust

fell from naked heights.

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

"violent means make for violent ends"
evolution is much smarter than revolution...when it comes to love...
i like this one, a lot.
j.

[andrew mitchell]

Thanks J for your words, I agree too revolution is all too rushed without thinking.