The eclipse from the pagan you.

Only when

one strips back our humanity

dancing around Stonehenge

one sees our true nakedness.

We painted with stars,

and consumed by the cosmos -

stripped back only to come back

again brighter than before.

My heart is the sun

my soul the void

and you are the moon

who will forever cast shadows.

In an eclipse by you

my loves passes through

an earthly shadow

of your heavenly body.

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1/26/2020
4:35 PM U.S.A. MST
This review content authored by PB Jacobs (www.writerscafe.org).
My review content of "The eclipse from the pagan you," by andrew mitchell.

Hey, andrew!

Not much for a wise realist these day's, huh? I spy wise realist personality type extremism, as if something in life sparked an off-kilter thought in you.

Alright, I only kind of get what you are saying, here, as it seems as though you are writing out to someone in particular, andrew...

Yeah, I'm kind of a dummy, but are you writing out to someone, or something? You are not clear on this...

You might also want to be more clear on what "the pagan you" is, andrew... I don't follow you, here...

Just remember, I'm kind of a dummy, in terms of your content...


PB Jacobs (www.writerscafe.org)

[andrew mitchell]

Hi PB just a fictional write and pagan for me described the sun, the moon, the stars, Stonehenge, they were into the elements and earthly things. Thanks for your comments.