Cancelled, the trip to the moon.

I would have followed your word

to the moon  and back

but like a toy,

you threw me away.

You went back on your word

locking your love away.

In a second hand shop

I saw your locket.

Reviews

[John the Baptist]

Saw her locket, maybe a gift, in a second hand shop. Talk about adding insult to injury.

[Chris Shaw]

Rejection here and that hurts. A love that didn't last. Poignant piece here Andrew.

Chris

[andrew mitchell]

Thanks Chris there are a few of those going around, loves that didn’t last.

[Katrina Mckeown]

I remember young love and feeling like this , like I was just thrown away like a toy..
and yes their love his then second hand as I found someone else ! That’s what I took from your poem.

[andrew mitchell]

Spot on Katrina sometimes love is like that you may find a replacement. Thanks for stopping by.

[Katrina Mckeown]

You are most welcome. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

A sad ending to the poetry my friend Andrew. A toss away toy. A sad place to land. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you John you are too kind.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Andrew.