What lies in love's shores a washed?

On the shores of love

a heart rolled out 

from a shell empty -

now a hermit.

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

A great little piece of brevity here Andrew, so visual. Also high on pathos, that poor little hermit crab without a heart, living a solitary existence in his shell. Great metaphor for how some of our own species choose to live their lives.

Chris

[Einstein Noodle]

love it! the shores the shell and the crab .... er ... hermit ... what greater force is there than the seas and love that can drive one to live a solitary life ... really like the mininalism .. the metaphors and images ... i can so see that empty shell .. and hear and smell the ocean ... a much more detailed picture inspired ..
E.